Friday, January 25, 2013

Atlanta Van


Atlanta Van
Block 1
12/25/13

Dear Editor
            I am the one of a survivor during the fire in our workshop. You don’t understand what I’ve been thrown. I want to get out my story and hopefully give some advice of what other factors need to do so this tragic situation will never happen again.  During that time everything was going like a regular day but then one of the woman began to sniff a smoky scent. After a few moments all I saw were smoke and people panicking. I got knocked down to the floor getting stumbled a pond and one woman who has been working with me next to me helped me up. If it weren’t for her I would probably be trampled to death. But we all begin to run for the fire exit and the weird thing was that it was locked! What was there to do? Our boss tried to take the fire out with the fire hose but had no water in them. The only way was threw the elevator. As the elevator came up the entire woman begin to rush in. I was crowded. For many company’s, you should have fire hose with water that actually work. If you work in a high building have a stairway so if this fire ever happen you wouldn’t have to wait for the elevator. Whatever you do, please keep your company workers calm.

1 comment:

  1. Great job talking about being pushed down, it really makes it sound like you were there!

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