Dear Editor,
I am writing as one of the first responders who arrived first at the scene of the Triangle Shirt Waist Fire. When I arrived I looked up at the burning building and all I could see was thick black smoke and a little portion of the fire, which was crimson red. I could feel the heat waves and flames just piercing through the air. The first thing that I began to wonder was how many people were still trapped inside the building, and then I thought of how many of the trapped are even still alive or have a chance of survival. I started looking around and i would just see women and some men bleeding and screaming in pain, i felt as if it were an action movie scene.
Christian, what you have so far is AWESOME but it feels like you didn't quite finish it. Let me know if you need more time next time.
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