Dear Editor,
One day my parents and my sisters were in the car and our
parents told us we were going to the city.
When we got there they took us to a building that said massage parlor we
didn’t think any thing about it or what was to come. Our dad told my sisters to
get out and come with him my mom with tears in her eyes screaming no and unable
to stop him. Not knowing what was going on I sat dumbfounded not knowing I was
never going to see them again.
Sincerely,
Eric Baskin, brother of a victim
Eric, thanks for sharing. You do a good job telling the editor how you feel about your sisters getting taken away but you don't tell the editor why they were taken. Try to write a little bit more background information next time.
ReplyDeleteGood job.